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Jan Haag's avatar

Wow... those final two lines leave me stunned!

"...heart gaped in reverence,

astonished by this bolt of mystery."

Gorgeous, Moudi!

Kirk Lawson's avatar

What a gorgeous poem and thank you Moudi. May we all overcome our fear, mustering up courage to be brave and move forward in spite of it. For me horses have always embodied power and mystery so thank you for placing them at the center of your poem.

There’s the expression “to grab the bowl by the horns”. Maybe we all grab our horns and shake hard. Face our fears head on with such strength!

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